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        <article-title>Improving music composition through peer feedback: experiment and preliminary results</article-title>
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          <string-name>Daniel Mart´ın</string-name>
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        <contrib contrib-type="author">
          <string-name>Benjamin Frantz</string-name>
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        <contrib contrib-type="author">
          <string-name>Franc¸ois Pachet Sony CSL Paris</string-name>
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        <contrib contrib-type="author">
          <string-name>daniel.martin</string-name>
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          <string-name>pachetg@csl.sony.fr</string-name>
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      <abstract>
        <p>To which extent peer feedback can affect the quality of a music composition? How does musical experience influence the quality of a feedback during the song composition process? To answer these questions we designed and conducted an experiment in which participants compose short songs using an online lead sheet editor, are given the possibility to feedback on other participant's songs and can either accept or reject feedback on their compositions. This experiments aim at collecting quantitative data relating the intrinsic quality of songs (estimated by peer evaluation) with the nature of feedback. Preliminary results show that peer feedback can indeed improve both the quality of a song composition and the composer' satisfaction about it. Also, composers tend to prefer compositions from other musicians with similar musical experience level.</p>
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      <title>-</title>
      <p>Peer feedback has become an ubiquitous feature of online
education systems. Peer feedback consists in letting students
or participants in a class revise, assess and more generally
comment on the work of other students. This model is
opposed to the traditional one in which students’ works are
evaluated only by a teacher. Peer feedback is acknowledged to
bring many benefits [Rollinson, 2005] such as saving
teachers’ time as well as other pedagogical positive effects [Sadler
and Good, 2006]. With the increase of online learning
communities and MOOCS [September, 2013], peer feedback is
becoming more and more popular.</p>
      <p>Peer feedback is not only useful in pedagogical contexts, it
can be also used in creative tasks. In music composition,
collaborative composition has been addressed in several studies
[Donin, forthcoming 2016]. There are online creative
communities in which music is composed collaboratively by
several users [Settles and Dow, 2013].</p>
      <p>In those creative contexts, the following questions are
legitimate: to which extent peer-feedback can affect the quality
of a musical composition? What is the influence of the
musical experience of the composers involved in this process? To
address these questions we have designed a music
composition experiment based on anonymous one-way feedback with
no dialogue. Such a scenario differs from typical
collaborative composition contexts in which composers work together
hand by hand in a composition. The experiment is not aimed
at being realistic or to propose a new tool for collaboration
composition, but specifically to collect quantitative data
regarding the relation between feedback, skills and song
quality.</p>
      <p>We focus on the role of peer feedback in music
composition, specifically in lead sheet composition. A lead sheet
is a representation of a simple song consisting of a melody
and a corresponding chord grid. We propose an experiment
in which peer feedback consists in suggestions of changes of
certain parts of the lead sheet: specific notes or groups of
notes or chords. These musical suggestions can be
accompanied by a text explanation. Once a feedback is posted by
a participant, it can be reviewed by the composer, who then
decides to either accept it (and modify the lead sheet
accordingly) or discard it.</p>
      <p>Additionally to the sheer effect of feedbacks, we also
examine the characteristics of the composer, commentator or
judge of the participants. Indeed, having an extended
experience in music composition might be seen as a prerequisite to
write a nice song or to give useful suggestions. However,
previous research showed that expertise might not be as critical
as we could expect [Frese et al., 1999].
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      <title>Description of the experiment</title>
      <p>Participants are instructed to write a short composition using
an on-line lead sheet editor [Mart´ın et al., 2015]. Then they
are asked to give feedback to another participant’s
composition, and finally they are asked to improve their own
original composition using feedback posted on their composition.
Participants are divided randomly in two groups: participants
in the control group (G1) do not receive any feedback, and try
to improve the song by themselves, whereas participants from
the experimental group (G2) may use the feedback received
to improve their own song. The existence of these two groups
is ignored by the users so that the results are not biased.</p>
      <p>As we are trying to assess the impact of feedback on the
quality of a music composition, we need to estimate the
quality of all compositions as well as their various variations
during the experiment. To do so we use social consensus to
determine the quality of a song: participants listen and are given
the possibility to ”like” other participants’ compositions. The
quality of a song is then simply determined by the number of
likes obtained for that song. In the next section we describe
in detail each phase of the experiment:
2.1</p>
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        <title>Questionnaire</title>
        <p>Participants start the experiment by answering 15 questions
about to their experience in music, and more specifically in
music composition. For example, they are asked how many
years they have studied music theory, how many years they
have been playing in a band, which style of music they like
more, how often do they compose... etc.
2.2</p>
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      <sec id="sec-2-2">
        <title>Original composition</title>
        <p>Participants then write a short composition using the online
lead sheet editor. A lead sheet is a particular type of music
score widely used in jazz, bossa-nova and song-writing,
consisting on a monophonic melody and a chord grid. All
compositions have a fixed length of 8 bars; participants are not
able to add or delete bars, but they can choose the tempo and
the time signature of the song. Participants fill the 8 bars with
a melody and chord labels (e.g. Dmaj7, Em7...etc.). Figure 1
shows a screen-shot of the lead sheet editor.</p>
        <p>Participants can listen to their composition with a basic
MIDI player. When they are done they click on ”Save and
Finish”. Next, they answer a questionnaire about their
confidence in the quality, complexity and satisfaction on their
composition.
2.3</p>
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        <title>Feedback Posting</title>
        <p>Once they have finished their composition they are asked to
give feedback to another participant by suggesting
improvements in another participants’ composition. Each suggestion
can be at the most, two bars long. Participants can make as
many suggestions as they want as long as they do not
overlap. So, each participant can make a maximum of 8
suggestions (one per bar). To make a suggestion, participants must
choose the bar(s) to modify, then they can change the notes
and the chord symbols. Optionally, they can also leave a text
comment explaining their changes. Figure 2 shows a
composition in which a participant is entering suggestions with
an explanation. When they are finished, they answer a short
questionnaire about their confidence on the suggestions they
just made as well as their opinion on the original song they
modified.
Next, participants are asked to reconsider their own
composition and are asked to try to improve it. Participants from
G1 (control group) are told that they unfortunately did not
receive suggestions and are encouraged to try to improve their
own composition by themselves. Participants from G2 see the
suggestions they received from two other participants. They
can listen to all the suggestions. If they like a suggestion they
can accept it, so that it is kept and the song is automatically
updated accordingly. In addition to integrating suggestions,
they can modify freely their composition. Once they are
finished, they answer a questionnaire about their confidence on
their own improvement and on their opinion on the
suggestions received.
The last step of the experiment is to evaluate pairs of
compositions from other participants. Each pair of songs consist
on the original song and the improved song. Participants are
asked to evaluate each song by place it in a vertical display
with a legend from 0 (”I don’t like it”) to 100 (”I like it very
much”). Participants do not know which is the original and
the improved song when they are evaluating. One of the
versions is presented as song A and the other as song B and this
assignment is performed randomly. Participants have to
evaluate at least 5 pairs of songs in order to finish the experiment.
3</p>
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      <title>Results</title>
      <p>In this section we describe in detail the results obtained from
each phase of the experiment.
3.1</p>
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        <title>Population</title>
        <p>The experiment was conducted between February and July
2015. 66 participants completed the experiment (68% men
and 32% women). Mean age was 29.2 years, ranging from
19 to 61. Musical experience was measured through a
questionnaire with 7 items. The scale has a satisfactory sensibility
with an observed range from 7 to 41 (out of 0 to 42) and
we observed a mean of 28.7 with a Standard Deviation (SD)
of 8.9. The intern consistency is satisfactory (Cronbach’s
alpha=.82).</p>
        <p>Composition experience was measured through a
questionnaire with 5 items. The results show an overall low level
of experience concerning composition in our sample with a
mean 6.9 (SD=6.1) on a scale ranging from 0 to 30). The
intern consistency is satisfactory (Cronbach’s alpha=.85).
3.2</p>
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      <sec id="sec-3-2">
        <title>Composition effects</title>
        <p>Each participant was randomly assigned to either the control
group (G1) or the experimental group (G2). No significant
differences were observed between the two groups in
relation to age, gender, musical experience or composition
experience.</p>
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      <sec id="sec-3-3">
        <title>Composition evaluations</title>
        <p>During the evaluation step, we checked if participants had
listened to the songs before evaluating them. On the 1195
evaluations made, 219 were made without listening to the song.
We removed those evaluations.</p>
        <p>The songs were evaluated by an average of 8.8 different
judges. The mean score of the evaluations made during the
evaluation phase is 53.25 (SD = 13.26) on a scale ranging
from 0 to 100. However, judges might be more or less strict,
and some songs might have been evaluated by a particularly
strict or generous participant. To take into account the
severity of the judges, we have standardized the evaluations to
get z-scores where the mean and standard deviation used are
based on all the evaluations made by a given participant. As
a result, the mean of the standard scores is approximately
equal to zero, and a standard deviation of approximately .50.
It should be noted that this final score correlates strongly
with the raw score (r=.84). This result indicates that we had
enough evaluations for each songs to avoid any severity bias.</p>
      </sec>
      <sec id="sec-3-4">
        <title>Original Composition</title>
        <p>The questionnaire that participants were asked to
complete after finishing the original composition included
selfestimation questions about the quality, complexity and
satisfaction for their composition on scales ranging from very
bad/simple/unsatisfied (0) to very good/complex/satisfied (6).
We also asked them to evaluate the time they spent to make
their composition and if they used an instrument to help them
to compose (and which instrument if they did).</p>
        <p>Results show a mean quality of 2.8 (SD=1.5), a mean
complexity of 1.9 (SD=1.6) and a mean satisfaction of 3.2
(SD=1.6). Only the complexity is significantly different to the
center of the scales which is 3 (T(65)=-5.27 ; p&lt;.0001). This
means that the participants tend to judge their work as rather
simple (low complexity). We also observed positive and
significant correlations between these three measures, ranging
from r=.41 to r=.80.</p>
        <p>During the suggestion step, we asked the participants to
also rate the quality and complexity of the songs they had
to comment. Each composition from the experimental group
(G2) was commented by two different participants. In the end
we obtained the score from the author and two other scores
from two different commentators. Interestingly, there was no
correlation between the scores from the original composer
and the ones from the commentators (r&lt;.10), but the two
commentators did agree together on the quality (r=.80) and
on the complexity (r=.70).</p>
        <p>Moreover, from the judgments done during the evaluation
phase (in which participants evaluate pairs of songs from
other participants), the measurement of the quality of each
original song (standardized to z-scores) allows us to estimate
the composition skills level of its author. Surprisingly, we
observed that the quality of the original song is only marginally
related to the composition experience (r=.18, p=.15) or to the
musical experience (r=.19, p=.12).</p>
        <p>We also asked the participants whether they used an
instrument to help them in their composition. Results show a
marginally significant effect in favor of the use of an
instrument on the mean quality score (T(64)=-0.87, p=.38).</p>
        <p>The mean duration of the composition time of the song as
evaluated by the participants is 30 minutes (SD=32 min)
ranging from 1 minute to 240 minutes. This evaluation is largely
underestimated by the participants because the real duration
calculated from the time spent on the composition software
is significantly longer (m=67 min; T(65)=4.20, p&lt;.001). The
correlation between these two durations is not very high, but
significant (r=.46, p&lt;.001 ) indicating that the error of
duration estimation is not exactly the same for everyone.
Interestingly, we observed that the quality of the original songs (from
the evaluation phase) is not linked with the time spent to
compose, whether it is subjective (r=.04) or objective (r=.03).
This result suggests that in a situation where there is no time
constraint, the amount of time devoted to compose has no
effect on its quality.</p>
        <p>Finally, there is a difference in the consensual quality of the
original song, obtained from the evaluation of several
participants (0.07 in G1 vs. -0.15 in G2). This could be due to
differences in the group of judges evaluating each song.</p>
      </sec>
      <sec id="sec-3-5">
        <title>Suggestions</title>
        <p>In the questionnaire filled after making the suggestions,
participants were asked how much do they think the song they
are revising will be improved due to their modifications (on a
7 points Likert scale ranging from 0 ”very little”, to 6 ”very
much”).</p>
        <p>The participants from G2, the experimental group (N=30),
received two suggestions for their final composition. Once
they finished, we asked them if the suggestions received were
interesting (on a 7 points Likert scale ranging from 0 ”very
little”, to 6 ”very much”). Additionally, we recorded the
number of suggestions they received and the number of texts
comments received.</p>
        <p>We ran a series of correlations between these measures and
the improvement effect (the difference between the original
song and the final song on the quality judgment score). None
were significant, suggesting that neither the number of
suggestions received nor the number of explanations for that
suggestions have an impact on the improvement of a song.</p>
      </sec>
      <sec id="sec-3-6">
        <title>Final composition</title>
        <p>Overall, we can see that the control group, G1, does not
improve significantly between the original song (m=.07) and the
final song (m=.12) (improvement effect = .05, T(35)=0.94,
p=.35). However, we do see a significant improvement for
the experimental group, G2, between the original song
(m=.15) and the final song (m=.08) (improvement effect = .23,
T(29)=2.47, p=.02). See Figure 3.</p>
        <p>We also examined the subjective evaluation of the
participants concerning the improvement of their song. We
constructed two composite scores. One from the self-evaluation
scales of the original song (quality, complexity and
satisfaction), one from the self-evaluation scales of the final song
(quality, complexity and satisfaction). The intern consistency
of those composite scores are satisfactory (the two Cronbach’
alphas are above .81). We then conducted a mixed between
participants (control and experimental groups) x within
participants (original and final song) analysis of variance. We
observed a significant interaction between groups and songs
(F(1,64) = 7.07, p=.01). To explore this interaction, we used
a post-hoc analysis with Tuckey HSD tests. Results show
that participants who received suggestions had a significant
improvement between the original and final song (p&lt;.001)
while the control group had no improvement (p=.49) See
Figure 4.</p>
        <p>When evaluating songs, users did not know which song
was the original and which one was the final, as the order of
the songs was determined randomly. This was a design
decision to avoid the fact that participants could tend to rate better
the final song, as it is supposed to be improved. Aditionally
we wanted to ensure that songs were not better rated just
because they had more modifications. To check this point, we
used and melodic similarity algorithm [Urbano et al., 2011] to
estimate the similarity between each original and final songs.
The correlation between the percent of similarity and the
improvement effect based both on the composer’s subjective
opinion and on the scores from the judges are low (r=-.36,
p=.003 and r=-.19, p=.13), which suggests that the
improvement is not linked to the dissimilarity between the two
versions.</p>
      </sec>
      <sec id="sec-3-7">
        <title>Lead sheet editor</title>
        <p>The software used was developed specifically for the
experiment and we asked participant whether it was frustrating (0)
or helpful (6) to compose with it. Results show a mean of
3.13 after the first composition and 3.41 after the final
composition (the difference is not significant) which means that
even if the online editor was not specially helpful, it did not
hinder the composition process.</p>
      </sec>
      <sec id="sec-3-8">
        <title>Experience effect on evaluations</title>
        <p>To find out whether musical experience has an impact on the
way participants judge song from other participants. We
divided our sample of participants in two groups according to
their experience as musician (based on the median). We also
divided our sample of songs according to the experience as
musician of their author. We then ran a two-way ANOVA to
explore the effect of the experience of the judges according to
the experience of the compositor. Results show a crossed
interaction between these two variables (F(1,61)=7.63, p=.007)
as illustrated in figure 5. These results indicate that
experienced judges give high scores to songs from experienced
authors and low scores to songs from non-experienced authors.
It is exactly the opposite for the non-experienced judges.
This means that participants tend to prefer compositions from
other participants with similar experience. This could explain
the difference in the evaluation of the original songs in G1
and G2. The groups of judges evaluating each song could
have different level of expertise.
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      <title>Conclusion</title>
      <p>The aim of this experiment was primarily to examine
quantitatively the impact of peer feedback in music composition
and secondly to assess how important is the experience of the
participants as musicians or composers in the whole process.
Before any improvement or suggestions, participants had to
write their first song. Interestingly, results show that
participants’ previous experience in composition did not impact the
quality of their song. The same pattern was also found for
the participants’ previous experience as a musician. These
two results suggest that the quality of a song (based on social
consensus) does not really tap in musicality but in something
else, presumably creativity. As before, creativity might play
an important role [Frese et al., 1999].</p>
      <p>Results show that composers who received feedback (G2)
clearly evaluated better the improved song than the original,
meaning that they were satisfied with the improvement they
made. Further, the evaluation based on social consensus had
a longer improvement also for G2. Hence, participants who
received feedbacks not only felt that they had composed a
better song after the improvement step, but they actually did.
This basic finding suggests that improvements in music may
be achieved even without real collaboration with dialogues
and active interactions, but by simple suggestions on a single
occasion.</p>
      <p>Since there is a difference on the evaluation of the
original songs between G1 and G2, we wanted to verify whether
experience can make a difference when evaluating songs and
we found out that participants tend to like more songs that are
composed by other participants with similar musical
experience.</p>
      <p>Future work may be done by going deeper in
determining the influence of the participants’ experience. For
example, by checking when are songs more improved, taking
into account the experience of composers, commentators and
judges. Further, we could assess more precisely which
suggestions were actually used (or accepted) by the original
composer to obtain a ranking of commentators whose suggestions
are most accepted, as a measure of how good commentators
they are. We could check also if suggestions from
experienced commentators are more likely to be used from
inexperienced composers, or whether experienced composers usually
accept suggestions of other composers, and how does this
affects the improvement of the song.</p>
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      <title>Acknowledgments</title>
      <p>This work is supported by the Praise project (EU FP7
number 388770), a collaborative project funded by the European
Commission under programme FP7-ICT-2011-8.</p>
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