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      <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.1145/2883851.2883854</article-id>
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        <article-title>Writing Analytics, Data Mining, and Writing Studies</article-title>
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          <string-name>Norbert Elliot</string-name>
          <email>elliot@njit.edu</email>
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        <contrib contrib-type="author">
          <string-name>Katie Walkup</string-name>
          <email>kwalkup@mail.usf.edu</email>
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          <string-name>Joseph Moxley</string-name>
          <email>mox@usf.edu</email>
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          <string-name>1. INTRODUCTION</string-name>
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          <institution>New Jersey Institute of Technology</institution>
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          <addr-line>323 Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. Blvd, Newark, NJ 07102, 1-856-952-7680</addr-line>
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          <country country="US">USA</country>
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          <institution>The following passage from Victor Hugo's Notre-Dame de Paris, is quoted in David Jay Bolter's Writing Space: The Computer</institution>
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          <addr-line>Hypertext, and the History of Writing [1].</addr-line>
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          <institution>University of South Flordia</institution>
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          <addr-line>4202 E. Fowler Ave, Tampa, FL 33620, 1-813-922-1492</addr-line>
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          <institution>University of South Florida</institution>
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          <addr-line>4202 E. Fowler Ave, Tampa, FL 33620, 1-813-974-2421</addr-line>
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          <country country="US">USA</country>
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      <pub-date>
        <year>2016</year>
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      <fpage>481</fpage>
      <lpage>483</lpage>
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        <p>The primary goal of this workshop is to facilitate a research community around the topic of large-scale data analysis with a particular focus on writing studies, data mining, and analytics. The workshop aims hopes to generate cross-disciplinary research among writing program directors and faculty, computational linguists, and educational measurement specialists. Opening the window of his cell, he pointed to the immense church of Notre Dame, which, with its twin towers, stone walls, and monstrous cupola forming a black silhouette against the starry sky, resembled an enormous two-headed sphinx seated in the middle of the city. The archdeacon pondered the giant edifice for a few moments in silence, then with a sigh he stretched his right hand toward the printed book that lay open on his table and his left hand toward Notre Dame and turned a sad eye from the book to the church. “Alas!” he said, “This will destroy that.”</p>
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      <p>In Bolter's seminal work Writing Space: The Computer,
Hypertext, and the History of Writing, he begins with the above
epigram about the book replacing the church [1]. Bolter uses this
idea to parallel the replacement of the printed book with
hypertext. As Bolter explains, “The idea and the ideal of the book
will change: print will no longer define the organization and
presentation of knowledge.”
This workshop fully realizes Bolter's idea that “ceci tuera cela,” or
“this will destroy that.” When applied to Writing Analytics (WA),
researchers and practitioners stand at a pivotal point of change.
Writing Analytics are going to redefine the teaching and learning
space by replacing feedback as teachers and students have always
delivered feedback. The affordances of digital tools mean that
machines can process and present knowledge to an extent
unimaginable by Bolter is a future that seems to have few limits.
Data-collection methods such as Latent Semantic Analysis (LSA)
and Natural Language Processing (NLP) have enabled researchers
in WA to present studies that portend a complex future for the
discipline of Writing Studies—a discipline where humanities
collaborative with mathematicians on predictive algorithms,
corpus linguists on linguistic patterns discerned from big data,
and computer sciences on intelligent tutoring systems. WA may
eventually replace grading as we know it, but the research area is
controversial, especially for researchers in the humanities.
To understand these concerns, it is important to recognize the
history of providing machine feedback. While many humanities
researchers reject the idea of WA and the use of corpus methods
to refine feedback, Tackitt et al. point out that feedback and
grading have always been controversial practices [2]. Many have
investigated the reliability of instructor evaluation of writing
within and without the disciplines [2]. Before these, however,
Tackitt et al. write that “the evaluation of student learning through
student writing is a modern model made possible through modern
means and methods.”
With this brief reminder that technologies replace technologies,
the workshop leaders can look beyond the controversies of WA.
This workshop will then seek to extend and surmount the current
boundaries of WA [3] by attention to the following :
1. Structuring opportunities for students to learn
2. Understanding the cognitive, interpersonal, intrapersonal
constructs, as they emerge within sociocognitive and sociocultural
settings, that enable students to recognize and respond to feedback
3. Gaining actionable information about what practices will help
students to become better writers in academic and workplace
settings
When WA is reconfigured to embrace student learning, we can
see that the efforts of researchers and practitioners change the
learning space. With interdisciplinary collaboration, we can
mediate the constructs that underlie WA as a field of research.
This workshop centers around mapping writing analytics from an
interdisciplinary, student-centered perspective. As researchers
point out, discussing WA from a disciplinary perspective can
distract researchers and practitioners from completing actionable
research.</p>
      <p>The workshop begins with an activity in mapping writing
analytics, led by Joseph Moxley (University of South Florida).
The ensuing presentation extends foundational perspectives on the
definition of Writing Analytics (WA) to further conceptualize the
field. The authors use the metaphor of mapping to understand the
tensions and successes navigated by researchers and practitioners
and to chart new ways in which this field can benefit the domains
of academia, business, and culture.</p>
      <p>This interdisciplinary approach allows the audience to
reconceptualize the field. From there, Alex Rudniy (Fairleigh
Dickinson University) and Norbert Elliot (New Jersey Institute of
Technology) explore the use of n-grams in analyzing student and
instructor comments within My Reviewers1, a web-based learning
environment. Shown to be informative in a wide variety of
applications, n-gram analysis is of interest in determining concept
proliferation in topics, purposes, terminologies, and rubrics used
in writing courses. As the present study demonstrates, unigram,
bigram, trigram, fourgram, and fivegram analytic methods reveal
important information about instructor and student use of
concepts. This analysis holds the potential to lead to precise and
actionable revision behaviors.</p>
      <p>David Kaufer and Sugura Ishizaki (Carnegie Mellon University)
introduce the concept of textual visualization to enhance learning
in core writing courses. These authors use corpus methods to
show that writing tasks require countless composing decisions
that are typically beyond the conscious grasp of writers. Much of
the skill of being “text aware” is to understand that texts produced
from classroom assignments are not just composed of words and
sentences but of highly structured and often highly predictive
composing decisions. However, the decision-making underlying
writing is an extremely abstract idea that is hard to make tangible
for students. Although a significant number of pedagogical
approaches has been investigated in the past three decades, the
means to help students acquire more tangible understanding and
control of their composing decisions has not been addressed. The
authors propose to address this gap by developing a corpus-based
learning tool to help students notice and reflect on composition
decisions in their writing and to become more self-aware,
reflective writers.
1 Dr. Joseph Moxley wishes to disclose a potential conflict of
interest: while the My Reviewers software is not commercially
available, it may become commercially available in the future.
Because the data collection methods used in this study
demonstrate the viability of My Reviewers, this research study
may enhance the commercial value of My Reviewers.
Ultimately, USF owns My Reviewers; however, Moxley
possesses the rights to license My Reviewers. Given this
potential conflict, Professor Moxley has filed the necessary USF
conflict of interest paperwork. The Conflict of Interest
Committee at USF has developed a management plan with
which Dr. Moxley has complied prior to submitting this and
similar research.</p>
      <p>Valerie Ross, Mark Liberman, Lan Ngo, Rodger LeGrand
(University of Pennsylvania) address another kind of reflective
writing: peer feedback. The Critical Writing Program at Penn
began working with My Reviewers in the Fall of 2013, working
collaboratively with the My Reviewers team at the University of
South Florida to develop a portfolio solution. Since then,
students evaluate peer’s portfolios. In turn, instructors use
eportfolio tools to evaluate middle and end-of-semesters
portfolios. As a result, Penn has developed a large corpus of peer
reviews and epotfolio reviews. In this study, Ross et al. use a
weighted log-odds-ratio, informative Dirichlet prior method (“bag
of words” approach) to analyze student comments and scores
posed to My Reviewers, which is designed to collect student
writing as well as their peers' comments and scores on those
drafts. This preliminary study suggests that the use of this
methods shows lower-performing writers might be receiving kinds
of feedback generally viewed as counterproductive in the field of
writing studies.</p>
      <p>From examining the effectiveness of feedback on revision,
attitudes toward writing, student and instructor training and
motivation, participants in this workshop will then begin to
understand how big data researchers approach corpuses of student
revisions. Chris Holcomb and Duncan Buell (University of South
Carolina) approach First Year Composition as a big data
phenomenon by prototyping software to study revision in a large
corpus of student papers. The authors address a question central to
scholarship in Composition and Rhetoric: What role does revision
play in students' writing processes?
Denise Comer (Duke University) closes the day's presentations by
recasting the framework for big data and WA research. Comer
uses the frame of writing transfer to explore how researchers can
transfer strategies, approaches, and knowledge about writing
gained from big-data writing analtyics to other writing pedagogy
contexts. The author will share methods and results from four
bigdata research projects, which stem from research gained in a
writing-based Massive Open Online Course. Comer will present
findings on big data and writing assessment, writing and
peer-topeer interactions, writing and negativity, and peer-review and
transfer.</p>
      <p>This workshop closes on a final collaborative activity, as the
participants are asked once again to return to a mind-map of
Writing Analytics. Using lessons learned from corpus methods
and big data techniques, participants will reconceptualize the field
from an interdisciplinary, actionable perspective.
3. REFERENCES
[1] Bolter, D. J. (1991). Writing space: The computer, hypertext,
and the history of writing. Lawrence Erlbaum: Hillsdale, NJ.
[2] Tackitt, A., Moxley, J., and Eubanks, D. (2015). Signifying
scores: Instructor rating as an assessment measure. Manuscript
submitted for publication.</p>
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