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          <string-name>Joseph M. Moxley</string-name>
          <email>mox@usf.edu</email>
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          <string-name>Katie Walkup</string-name>
          <email>kwalkup@mail.usf.edu</email>
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          <institution>University of South Florida</institution>
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          <addr-line>4202 E. Fowler Ave, Tampa, FL 33620, 1-813-922-1492</addr-line>
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          <institution>University of South Florida</institution>
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        <p>This paper extends foundational perspectives on the definition of Writing Analytics (WA) to further conceptualize this nascent field of research. The affordances of digital tools have enabled us to reimagine WA's meanings and applications. The authors use the metaphor of mapping to understand the tensions and successes navigated by researchers and practitioners and to chart new ways in which this field can benefit the domains of academia, business, and culture. Approaching WA from an interdisciplinary perspective allows the field to consider new research questions.</p>
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        <kwd>foundations</kwd>
        <kwd>visual mapping</kwd>
        <kwd>My Reviewers</kwd>
        <kwd>STEM</kwd>
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      <title>1. INTRODUCTION</title>
      <p>
        This paper seeks to expand the work of Buckingham Shum,
Knight, McNamara, Allen, Bektik, and Crossley [
        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref1">1</xref>
        ] in
establishing the foundations of Writing Analytics (WA). Despite a
growing interest in the applications of WA, and several
conferences on these applications, including LAK (Learning
Analytics and Knowledge) and EDM (Educational Data Mining),
there remain surprisingly few foundational pieces on WA. This
paper examines this field and reimagines its research areas with
the end goal of charting the main questions of WA and its move
into interdisciplinary domains. As the available literature
suggests, researchers sometimes disagree as to the purpose of
WA, and disagreements intensify when researchers approach the
subject from a disciplinary perspective. However, when WA is
visualized from an interdisciplinary perspective, the tangled
threads of the field sort themselves into fairly clear questions,
with plenty of room for expansion. Knight and Littleton [
        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref3">2</xref>
        ] write
that “there is an intriguing array of opportunities within the
middle space of learning sciences and computational techniques
around discourse data” (203). This paper explores this middle
ground.
      </p>
      <p>To help illustrate this middle ground, we introduce preliminary
charts that map the main corpora, orientations, implementations,
and domains in WA as a research field. These research maps
represent the work of graduate students in a Rhetoric and
Technology course at the University of South Florida (USF). Over
the semester, students discussed WA research and mind-mapped
scholars, concepts, and current applications of WA. Students were
also encourage to conduct their own interdisciplinary research
utilizing corpus methods.</p>
      <p>
        The present study examines two infographics produced by this
graduate seminar. The first infographic represents WA from a
disciplinary perspective; specifically, we adopt a
humanitiescentric viewpoint. This research map exemplifies current tensions
in the field of WA, and particularly showcases the critique of WA
from many scholars in the humanities [
        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref4">3</xref>
        ].
      </p>
      <p>The second research map represents a wider understanding of the
possibilities offered by WA. The categories suggested by this map
show efforts to elide disciplinary tensions, to move beyond quick
conceptions like automated writing evaluation (AWE) or machine
scoring. While the first research map symbolizes disciplinary
concerns and critique of WA, the second research map moves the
conversation into a more productive avenue, facilitating
discussion of what methods like datamining and predictive
analysis can do for interdisciplinary research.</p>
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      <title>2. PERSPECTIVES ON WA</title>
      <p>These research maps draw on critical research on corpus methods,
datamining, machine learning, and the implications of these
digital tools on the job market. The authors are particularly
interested in the Critical Perspectives on Writing Analytics
workshop from the Learning Analytics and Knowledge 2016
conference. Concerns in WA include topics on Latent Semantic
Analysis (LSA), Natural Language Processing (NLP), and
Discourse-Centric Learning Analytics (DCLA). From the
available literature on the subject, the authors drew three
preliminary research questions:
1.
2.
3.</p>
      <sec id="sec-2-1">
        <title>Should developmental tools that respond to student</title>
        <p>
          writing with formative and summative feedback be used
in classrooms before they are considered finished [
          <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref5">4</xref>
          ]?
        </p>
      </sec>
      <sec id="sec-2-2">
        <title>How does our bias as teachers of English Composition inform our concerns about WA, and how can we surmount these concerns [2]?</title>
      </sec>
      <sec id="sec-2-3">
        <title>If we can overcome our disciplinary perspective, how</title>
        <p>
          might a wider viewpoint on the practices and
implementations of WA benefit the field [
          <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref3">2</xref>
          ]?
In keeping with Buckingham Shum et al. [
          <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref1">1</xref>
          ], the authors wished
to “[recognize] the many wider issues that aid or obstruct
analytics adoption in educational settings, such as theoretical and
pedagogical grounding, usability, user experience, stakeholder
design engagement, practitioner development, organizational
infrastructure, policy and ethics.” These foundational concerns of
WA find their places in both research maps.
        </p>
        <p>
          Review of available literature on WA suggests that its present
service promise is pedagogical in nature, in keeping with its roots
in Learning Analytics. As WA expands its domains, however, we
expect its service promises to expand as well. As Knight &amp;
Littleton [
          <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref3">2</xref>
          ], write, “our analytic techniques should not be limited
by the ways in which educational dialogue has previously been
operationalized; new analytic techniques afford new opportunities
to theorize and reconsider what constitutes productive dialogue”
(193). In keeping with Knight &amp; Littleton [
          <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref3">2</xref>
          ], we created our
maps using their data-driven science method. We imagined our
target goals, speculated behaviors which would indicate these
goals being reached, and created tasks which would cause these
behaviors.
        </p>
        <p>
          To create a data-driven map of WA as a research area also
required detailed discussions of the possibilities offered by both
WA and learning analytics [
          <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref6">6</xref>
          ]. These possibilities were tempered
with research on the current limitations of AWE technologies, as
well as user's current experiences with these technologies [
          <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref7">7</xref>
          ].
Finally, researchers and practitioners in WA, to fulfill its current
service promise of improving education, must consider issues of
ethics and how WA will protect the best interests of students [
          <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref8">8</xref>
          ].
        </p>
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      <title>3. SITE OF RESEARCH</title>
      <p>The University of South Florida (USF) is a test site for My
Reviewers, a web-based learning environment. English and
Chemistry instructors and students at USF use My Reviewers to
collaborate digitally with students, which results in actionable
feedback.</p>
      <p>
        This feedback is recorded in a corpus of over a billion words.
Researchers have used the My Reviewers corpus to propose and
complete projects involving corpus linguistics, datamining, and
automated writing evaluation (AWE). My Reviewers is a vigorous
site for corpus-based research, developed in response to the needs
of faculty and students at USF. Presently, about 12,000 students at
USF use My Reviewers features, which include document
markup, flexible peer review assignments, customizable rubrics,
customizable projects, team projects, peer review for team
projects, reporting tools and five e-books. In addition, faculty at
MIT, Dartmouth, Penn, and NCSU are using My Reviewers in
undergraduate STEM courses to research the efficacy of peer
review, thanks to NSF Prime grant #1544239. These researchers
have published extensively on the benefits of our development,
especially ways it facilitates evidence-based curriculum changes:
we have explored ways My Reviewers can be leveraged to inform
evidence-based curriculum changes [
        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref9">9</xref>
        ], researched the
development and transfer of reasoning capabilities [
        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref10">10</xref>
        ], and
compared students’ reviews to instructors’ reviews [
        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref11">11</xref>
        ]. Thanks
to this user base, IRB approvals, and end-user license, we now
have proprietary access to a large corpus of intermediate and final
drafts that includes major course projects along with instructors’
comments to these texts.
      </p>
      <p>Clearly, the graduate students who originally composed these
research maps already had a great deal of experience with corpus
methods, due to prior experiences with My Reviewers. These
previous experiences with My Reviewers and corpus methods
enable the graduate students to share their concerns, as well as
concerns about use of data, which the first map will show.</p>
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    <sec id="sec-4">
      <title>4. FIRST MAP</title>
      <p>The first map attempts to show the data WA can collect. While
WA does collect data about identity, work, and culture, this map
has several limitations. The first, and most obvious, is that the
graduate students created a map in the shape of an eye, which
highlights their perception of WA as primarily the work of
surveillance. The graduate students and instructors who
envisioned this map had trouble moving past their concerns about
privacy, surveillance, and ethics.</p>
      <p>
        These concerns are also voiced by such entities as the National
Council of Teachers of English [
        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref4">3</xref>
        ], who write that Machine
Scoring is based on “narrowly conceived, artificial” tests that
“subvert attention to other purposes and varieties of writing
development in the classroom”. Yet as graduate students
examined work using corpus methods [
        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref12">12</xref>
        ], and met with
instructors using LSA and NLP to inform WA, they began to
move beyond their initial construction of the research area as a
field of surveillance and judgment.
      </p>
      <p>To further mitigate the barriers posed by disciplinarity, Dr.
Moxley presented his work with NSF I-Corps. This project
involved interviewing over 100 faculty, students, and writing
program administrators across the United States. These
individuals’ opinions toward WA made it clear that a second
attempt at mapping the research field should be made.
The first map does not delineate a pathway through the middle
ground. Instead, it only accounts for the many possibilities of
WA, and from a humanities-centric perspective, many of these
possibilities can seem negative. The second map immediately
rectifies this problem with the bottom question of “Who?” To
achieve an interdisciplinary perspective, researchers and
practitioners must believe that WA can serve not just academia,
but business and cultural interests as well.</p>
      <p>The revised map presented by the graduate students showed
addressed these needs by building a map of WA upon the idea of
benefit to interdisciplinary domains and their needs. From there,
researchers can select an orientation, gather data into a corpus,
and implement that corpus toward a specific research goal. This
map allows for a more actionable definition of WA's goals and
purpose.</p>
    </sec>
    <sec id="sec-5">
      <title>5. CONCLUSIONS</title>
      <p>This use of WA to inform interdisciplinary research shows that
reconceptualizing the field helps move beyond usability discussions
and stakeholder theory into questions of how WA can be used to
benefit multiple domains. While usability, stakeholders, and
ethical considerations are still immensely important conversations
in this field, as one can see from the first map, they can create
associations that distract the research or practitioner from creating
a viable plan of completing research.</p>
      <p>As shown by the graduate students in this seminar, a new
visualization of the research questions in WA helped ground this
new interdisciplinary perspective. By using the concept of
mapping as more than an organizational tool, researchers can
more effectively move through the phases of a data-driven
research project.</p>
      <p>By presenting this study, we hope to encompass and extend
current attitudes and definitions of WA. By reformulating WA to
perform interdisciplinary educational research, we can:
1.
2.
3.</p>
      <sec id="sec-5-1">
        <title>Structure opportunities for students to learn</title>
      </sec>
      <sec id="sec-5-2">
        <title>Understand the cognitive, interpersonal, and</title>
        <p>intrapersonal constructs, as they emerge within
sociocognitive and sociocultural settings, that enable
students to recognize and respond to feedback</p>
      </sec>
      <sec id="sec-5-3">
        <title>Gain actionable information about what practices will</title>
        <p>help students to become better writers in academic and
workplace settings
When WA is reconfigured to embrace student learning, we can
see that the efforts of researchers and practitioners change the
learning space. With interdisciplinary collaboration, we can
mediate the constructs that underlie WA as a research field.
Joseph Moxley wishes to disclose a potential conflict of
interest: while the My Reviewers software is not
commercially available, it may become commercially
available in the future. Because the data collection methods
used in this study demonstrate the viability of My
Reviewers, this research study may enhance the commercial
value of My Reviewers. Ultimately, USF owns My
Reviewers; however, Moxley possesses the rights to license
My Reviewers. Given this potential conflict, Professor
Moxley has filed the necessary USF conflict of interest
paperwork. The Conflict of Interest Committee at USF has
developed a management plan with which Dr. Moxley has
complied prior to submitting this and similar research.</p>
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